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new poem by ~browneyedsuicide:iconbrowneyedsuicide:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


In the thoughts of the deadly
through the thumping of the arteries
the love turned black
the feelings so cold
he thrives for more
the wanting of suffering
and unatachement to all human rights
he's ran for so long
that he no longer remembers what love is
they are all looking for him
but no one will find him
he is lost in a madman's body
a madman's thoughts
of disgust and hatred so cold
he is the one you fear in the dark
when you are walking home alone
running from the shadows
from the fear of the unknown
he is the man who got away with murder.
©2005-2009 ~browneyedsuicide
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i was in science class and i decided to right a poem it is different a bit but yeah...just read it..

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~this-shht-is-BANANAS Jun 9, 2005, 1:22:01 PM
ou ou ou
i love this
i read it almost right after you wrote it
and i told you that it was great :)
jacky iLOVEyou
can't wait till tomorrow :)
you can't come over at like 8:30
cause if you do we can't go to the cemetary

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bitchesLOVEmeCAUSEtheyKNOiCANr ock

i could be your SCENEwhore if that's what you'd really like.

NEW DEVIANT ART ; PHOTOS AESD. . .
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~darkillusi0ns Jun 9, 2005, 1:25:18 PM
I really like this, the title is kinda bad though I have to admit :P Haha. "In the thoughts of the deadly, through the thumping of the arteries..."Anywho, good job. :)

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"My knuckles have turned to white, there's no turning back tonight- so hold on tight. Kiss me one last time- shut your eyes..."
- It's Dangerous Business Walking Out Your Front Door - Underoath
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~BurningChastity7 Jun 10, 2005, 7:35:47 AM
Wow-weee!!! I like this a lot. One of your best! Kept the whole them of insanity or whatnot throughout the whole thing. There weren`t even spelling mistakes that I noticed! Awesome. :hugs:
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~browneyedsuicide Jun 10, 2005, 7:53:55 AM
I know that the title is very bad i didnčt know what to name it so i just named no title meaning untitled...hey monday = my house = you + me + Rachel + Derek?? + Kayla (my friend) = my birthday partish thing = bonfire + swimming (maybe) = loads of fun....call me on sunday to tell me alright ?? (905) - 834 - 7634....alrighty??...
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~browneyedsuicide Jun 10, 2005, 7:54:51 AM
yes i know lol awww i love you you are so incouraging :)
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~browneyedsuicide Jun 10, 2005, 7:56:15 AM
lol yay thank you i know i like it to one of my different ones but hey some times different is what you need to get better :) lol yay no spelling mistakes mostly cause of Kayla....:)
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~this-shht-is-BANANAS Jun 10, 2005, 8:06:26 AM
haha
Jacky..
it's "encouraging" dear, but you were close,.
i cant wait till the show. ugh
i wish school was done and it wasnt so dam hot
iLA-LA-LA-LOVEyou

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bitchesLOVEmeCAUSEtheyKNOiCANr ock

i could be your SCENEwhore if that's what you'd really like.

NEW DEVIANT ART ; PHOTOS AESD. . .
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~BurningChastity7 Jun 10, 2005, 11:00:45 AM
oops...wanted to get emoticon but pressed submit!! I meant to say, Shh!! noone needs to know that:P And you are getting better, just keep swimming!!!
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